Heya another good poem
you did a good job
still you need puntuation
it dont take that long to read your poem
though and add some puntuation to it
as you go through it
a pause here and there
stuff like that
tis good though:D:D

Keenan

I love the poem. It has a lot of heart and love in it. Very good job. 5/5 =D

Good job 5/5