Love this one.. third party is invovled. yeah pretty decent, your words kept the decent in here. good job! can't find any flaws...

Andrew
This would have made an awesome challenge poem. The piece is still awesome.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Nicely written....rhyme and flow perfect....

i've really come to hate
loving every part of you
we represent everything
that i said id never do

^awesome verse!....all the best, Debbie