Aww once again i love ur last paragraph, and all your messages are so true and cute, but once again, some things just don't fit in and make sense, you need to read over ur work and think, does this make sense? does this fit?
example:

"Like the dove may you always find land"
What on earth? I dont understand that bit, yeah.....doves live on land dont they? I mean like, that just doesnt fit together,

"May your troubles and worries be lighter
That your heart will be free to dance
May your home be filled with laughter
And cheery warmth in wintertime"

That's good but the last bit the wintertime bit, to random, there could be a better way to end that paragraph example:

"May your troubles and worries be lighter
That your heart will be free to dance
May your home be filled with laughter
Let the good times come and never come to an end"

you get the picture...like make something match and still make sense...
Good work this is on the way,
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Dove finding land... its something i got from the biblical story about how Noah, after the flood, sent the dove to find land, and it came back with a leaf in a twig on its beak, meaning it found land.. its my way of saying that "may you find what you need."

What a charming write! Really enjoyed. My favourite lines are:

"And both in sunrise and in sunset
May there be someone to hold your hand"

Nice job.

Excellent!!!

Love it.