Wow, a very beautifuly created a great poem that shows you are a great talented poet,

i love every word of it, but the best part is
Just as every sadness leaves me,
he walks into my world.
No, not my world;
but the world of my dreams.

i love the way you answered yourself by a no that im sure we as true lovers dont want it to be a NO, but all we end up is with our world, the world of dreams, so creative dear.

you deserve a 5/5

I'm not so interested with long poems but it was a poem full of emotions, and the emotion you felt just help me finish the whole poem. such a lonely poem.. the imagination were really awesome. the flow were okay.

I loved that stanza that the tasteless pointed out
but i disagree with his/her opinion about it being able to cut down a couple
and wassup with the dude smiling on the inside
such a spongebob way of saying it??:P
good job
this is probably close to one of my favs by you
tis real good:D:D

Keenan

This is a fantastic poem which I reallx like. Great word choice and flow. 5.5

tc
Fsams

Amazing write! you used such strong words to make this poem so real! i loved it 5/5