Good job!

But there is something different
Behind this smile, you'll find
Something running deeper
In my soul, heart and mind.

This stanza really stands out.
Keep writing.
Take Care Cindy

Nawwww I find this poem to be very touching and quite cute, but also kinda sad =(
5/5
Your poems are improving ^.^ Are you going to become a poet?

SO mucH efficienT writinG. you'vE alwayS gooD aT youR joB. dE expressioN giveN herE iS verY mucH amazinG anD feelinG betteR tO reaD anD commenT...

theN 'A' gradE oN diS poeM iS possiblE, yoU deservE.... reallY yoU deservE. i aM prouD oN youR writinG aS welL aS oN youR preciouS feelingS towarD minE anD nazeeR's writingS.

thX 4 writinG anD keepinG uS iN pleasurE...

diS iS..... luzaN