Hey, thanks for the comment. This poem is good, I liked the title and the concept of the opal, the rhyming seemed forced in parts, but overall well done. Feel free to look at more of mine. Keep in touch hun, Greta xo

You're really good! tnx for reading my poems. this one is perfect! GOD BLESS

Great poem , well written and wording was really good, ,, I think you did a wonderful job on it, keep it up,,,your friend Tracy d................5/5

I like it a lot, beautifully written and very unique piece. I love the metaphors that you used. The wording in the whole poem is great, too.
Well done, 5/5

Andrew, you should not even think for a second this poem is bad.. I think it is beautiful and you did an excellent job on it! I loved the entire thing, but I would have to say the last 2 paragraphs were my favorite part of it. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~