I love the mataphors and similies you use in this, it makes it all the more effective...the emotion and depth in this are overwhelming, and while relatively short you've manaaged to pack so much into those words...beautifully done.

Very good poem,keep it up hun
and takecare
-Lisa

I've never been cheated on but this is a great poem

Geez.. guys are complete jerks!! You get rid of his memory..he's not worth it!

Btw.. very good poem! lol

5.5**
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I really like this! its very good! it sucks to be cheated on. my ex cheated on my w/ a guy...yes a guy! it hurt so much, but you'll get through. Keep up the great work. && thanks for your comments.

BabyGurl

VERY GOOD POEM!
So sorry about what happened.

Im sorry about your ex. :[[
itz a horrible thing to do, cheating.
i was cheated on too.
&& i was torn. :[[
itz been a lil over a month since you posted this poem.
i hope thingz have gotten better. :]]

5/5.

Hey hun lot of emotion in this poem.. very sad =( hope ur oriite. stay strong uve expressed urself well. xx

All but the last verse apply to me. me and my boyfriens broke up & i felt usless. but thankfully he didn't cheat on me.
5
another strong poem

First off, great poem, as...im sure all your others are as well ^^ all the quotes I have read and poems you are a very good writer, you have a gift. ^^ but second of all, don't you worry about him ^^ everything get better, I know it hurts but, you will live, don't let life get you down eles it wont let you get back up ^^

5/5 ^^