I liked this poem, it sort of describes love, the way I view it. It's kind of like the most amazing thing ever, but it can be so painful. Good job on this poem.

This caught my eye becauce i just re-read a poem i wrote about red roses and black. This one makes so much more sense than mine.

Wow. This is a very powerful poem. Great use of strong words. My favorite line was,

"Ungodly fumes,
Tainted was their lovers kiss."

Great imagery too. 5/5 Wonderful.

~Kat~

Very well written!!!!!!!!

Lol that seems to happen to everyone doesn;t it :'( lolz I loved it honestly it was short with a great message and everything =D

Briliant comparasism between love and death