This is so good, i love it!=]

AWWWWWWWWWW!!

its not worth anything at all
if you're not risking to take the fall

i loved rhese two lines
really amazin job 5/5

Andrew
Great piece.

we hold our hearts in our hands
in hopes of the promised land
still giving in to love's demands
in which we don't understand

Love this stanza. We all hope for the promise of love.
Take Care Cindy

We hold our hearts in our hands
in hopes of the promised land
still giving in to love's demands
in which we don't understand
^^^
I love this stanza .... I could read it a million times over!
Excellent read Andrew ... looking forward to reading more of your work
Take care
Luanne

Give everything that you have
so your heart can break in half
its not worth anything at all
if you're not risking to take the fall

^^how true!! A wonderful message within your words.