Wow...im not really into poems that don't rhyme but i gotta admit i really liked yours....you definetly have a way with words...keep up the good work this was an extremly beautiful yet sad poem 5/5

Amazing, the words you put in this poem is out of this world, very good, very touching, 5/5

I enjoyed reading this poem because in a sense I could relate to it. Its never easy to hurt someone that you have once or still care for, and the guilt can hurt deeply. A poem quite clearly from the heart. Take Care