Comments : A Lover's Dreams (Triolet)

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya good poem
    not totally sure what triolet is
    you might want to put an explanation of what it is
    at the end for readers who are not positive of all the different types of poetry
    such as myself:$:$ lol
    but the poem spoke to me and
    that is really good
    :D:D

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Oooo.. this is the first time I've ever read a Triolet poem, but I think you pulled it off quite nicely! The poem was beautiful.. and may I add, it was very neat and organized. It made the poem look more professional and even better =) Great job! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    THe power of music nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting. You created great atmosphere, it is simple but very powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Another good poem, you used a style and used it well to create a really sweet lovep oem xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh my this was just beautiful! I loved the style you used and the title really lured me in and I was curious to read more. The language was flawless and the imagery you created just blew me away. Well done *5/5*