This is nice, definatley ur best one so far. 5/5

Oh this one is beautiful.. i appreciate the meaning of this most especially in the last stanza "why not start today?.." the emotions were there cleary seen. the imagination were okay.

Cute. This poem had much emotion, yet the flow was not exactly spot on. I suggest to add more descriptive words and focus on the flow. Those are the two key things you need to learn to turn a poem from good to GREAT!
you did a good job.

Alot of emotion, the flow is a bit off, try reading it to yourself, after not reading it for a day or so, that will help you find where the flow skips, other than that good work 5/5

REALLY GOOD! Very much emotion. Feelings I can relate to...LOVEEE 5/5
-Jackie

Great message here! Wow.

The rhyming might have been a little stretched, but honestly I was more focused on the content than the format. Very nice job.