Wow. It hit me there. You write good.I envy you. (:

Wow i love it... it brings up lots in my past...

Nice poem...i've said many times that nonrhyming poems dont really interest me unless theres something that just captures my attention..and this one did..nice job.

Wow. thats...touching.
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This is a good poem.
I really like the part,
"but her apprehension
sent her spiraling down
as she fell in love
with the devil's song."
And it was really cool that you used and uncommon word like, betrothal, in your poem.
keep writing
peace
soffe

I agree with kitkat girl. That was also my favourite verse. I feel like a lot of your poetry is very easy to connect to and very realistic as well. Can't wait for more works of art from you!