HEY! nice poem, I love it 5/5, keep up the good work!! :))

This is the most beautiful poem i have ever red like omg i love it ur great

YouR writinG seemS tO bE EXHILARATING...
keeP uP yR gooD worK... moreoveR thx 4 yR kinD commentS .

luzaN

Nice poem~~ keep it up :)

The words you chose are amazing.
Very beautiful poem.
I love it. :)

5/5

~Mz.Raven

Wow, I love it, this is excellently written dark poem. The only thing that ruins the flow is the word "however", it somehow doesn't fit in the poem (that's just my opinion). The wording and whole atmosphere of this piece are great. 5/5 from me

HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT. verY mucH fascinatinG. keeP yR writinG tO shimmeR likE aS thiS onE.... 5/5

luzaN

Great poem....i loved it....the flow was perfect....and your choice of words were amazing....

excellent job.5/5 keep it up!

Unique poem with a good structure and the word choice is also good. keep it up 5/5

Omg hun thats amazing..you written it well.. i love this one..its now on my favoirte..

I like the topic of this poem. The ending is very powerful and effective!!! You have few mistakes in this poem, you repeated some words like, that destroys flow and leaves bad impression! You wrote this piece greatly. It is long but very interesting. You created excellent atmosphere also. 5/5

Wonderful,
this piece was seriously amazing. It was AMAZING. The emotion was there, it was pouring with metaphors and everything. The detail was unbelievable, I felt like I could see everything you wrote. This is amazing, one of the best pieces of poetry I have read. There was a true story behind this, it was magnificent.

Wow, amazing, very long though. I didnt like how in the ending you put 'Lord Satan' it kinda souns wierd to me. ANyway, i really liked the flow of your lines. Great job.

Cool poem. It has a few mistakes but imagery and atmosphere are excellent. I really like it!

A very interesting Dark poem.

So unique a topic, it was bone chilling. Effectivly expressed through your pen.
I absolutly loved it.
Keep it up,
Elaine. 5/5

Wonderfully written, dark poem. The imagery you created was amazing and the flow was nice. This was almost like a story. Overall it was quite captivating. 5/5 great read.

marcella

Great poem. I really liked the wording and the format of this poem. I loved it. I gave it a 5/5.

I enjoyed your poem to the fullest. It was excellent, and very deep. The length didn't seem so long due to the fact that it flowed. Amazingly Awesome, 5/5

SPEACHLESS
great job so much feeling
5/5