I like the different perspective in everything. That was very good. You do write a lot of sad, depressing poems. Not that that is a bad thing. I would say that you have a gift for bringing emotions to the surface with your writing.

Wow, this was awesome how you showed it from the childs point of view. It was so sad, I never cry, and my eyes are getting all watery. Heh, anyways, Keep writing.
Luv,

-Blue ^_~