Comments : Everlasting

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Awww.... I love it. So unique, and greatly expressed with so little words. It is simple, yet so beautiful. Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Short but sweet and thanks for all the read

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You wrote this poem powerfully!!! I like it very much. You created superb atmosphere with just a few words. Short and simple, but greatly written. You described emotions excellently! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    "two hearts
    started by
    three words"

    The word sometime very hard to say if we don't know how to say, maybe some people said it is easy, other say difficult, Beautiful write, though simply but meaningful....have a goo day, take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Proof that less can be more. Fantastic write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    That was such a sweet poem, you are a very good writer. Oh and thanks for the comment!

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's so sweet. I love it.