Gosh, when i started to read this, i got a very bad impression of the rest of the poem 5/5 it seemed dirty but it was funny at the end. lol

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Haha, that was really clever. Nice job!

Wow, *manic laughter*
i really like this poem, like a lot, no seriously, like loads.
i once heard a song a bit like this, though it actually ended with a swear word, TO SHOCK YOU!!! muhahaha. sorry. i need my medication.
nice one!!! keep it up!
kat x

Hehe i find you hilarious! lol 5/5