Comments : Is it my time?

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It's not your time yet, son. You are way too young! Let go of these thoughts... the world is full of people that want to be a friend. Seek for them instead of seeking those dark corners of your mind!

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    The pull of emotions here are clearly laid out. But as Ingrid said above ... it's not your time! Dream on ... and live on!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very good.
    Its not your time though.
    I haven't had enough time to get to know you, so you cant leave. =]

    5/5

    XOXO
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Wow amazing poem keep it up! 70/70

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo88

    I have dark poems too I feel ur pain
    But plzz don't go
    Don't leve thses world
    1000/1000

  • 16 years ago

    by resisting reason

    Dude, dont ever stop writing, ur very talented