This is a little scary. I like it but it is scary to realize what has happened here.

Omg that was fantastic, probly the best poem that I read today. Keep up the great work.

'I still hear the ringing in my ears, from the gunshot
When I close my eyes all I can see is his body drop
Blood splatters on the celling fan as it slowly turns
My hands hold the evidence of the powder burns'

^The Repetition really hit home with me, it was so strong, and so effective, especially with the little twist at the end.
I really enjoyed this,
keep it up
Elaine 5/5

AMAZING....wow....this is a perfect poem... the flow was great and the rhyming was on point throughout it all... and i love the repeatition and i like how it changed at the end.... wonderful job on this one! definately 5/5 from me.

Again, not sure if I like this one, just mainly due to the topic really. It's quite well written although coming from your last poem, I think it could be a little better, but noting too major really. The flow is good, and the feelings are well portrayed.

Again, I'm unsure of the repatition of the first stanza, I think it would have been better more as a 2 line stanza, however it's not major really.

I'll give you another 4/5 for it, well done :)

Wow this is dramatic, i am well impressed by this piece of poetry its fantastic, it flows so beautifully and reads great, i really enjoyed reading it, well done 5/5

Breath-taking! so sad and so deep! i was captivated from the begining. really well written and such beautiful and vivid imagery! well done!!! that's going in my favorites!!

Wow. it had such a strong story behind it. the way you expressed it was a little scary. i loved the imagery. nice work 5/5

Wow.
thats another awesome as poem.
i could really picture this poem in my head.
its kinda scarey but sad and has alot of emotion.
its AWESOME ! =D
5/5

xo.louiii