ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

Well done is what I can say.5/5
I hope for your life to be good and shall pray for this sweet girl
tc Sara
your friend
Rohan

Very deep piece written with emotion...although a dream may be broken, the pieces can still be collected to reach that dream...
nicely done!!

HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT.

luzaN

This is a good poem. I was really confused was it written in the point of view of a guy, girl, or both??
keep writing
soffe

Wow.. the way you express yourself is just phenomenal.. purely beautiful..

I loved the starting .. the first 2 lines just pull the reader in ..

"..How do u measure a lifetime of dreams
with heart and soul lost in autumn fields.."

amazingly penned..

Dont ever stop writing.

~Wake~