Wow very sad and nice 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

That poem was so sad but i loved it. it helped me think my baby cousin was just murdered on july 11 2007 i know i should just get over it its been too long now but still it hurts not knowing i'll never to c him now i never held him or seen him, he was 6 months old his mom set him on fire and watched him burn that poem helped alot i loved it.

Aww this is really sad, you're a good writer and its an awesome poem. Dont ever give up writting. youre too good...