I'm sorry to hear this. You must hate this person. A friendship is something important and I just hope that it can all turn out goof in the end. I'm so sorry Hari. But otherwise, this poem was well done.

I'm so sorry. Now that my head is clear, I understand. I love this poem, and I am happy that you've written it. I hope you can come out of the shadows and join in the happiness. This is in my favorites.

This poem reminds me so much of something that I've recently gone through and am still going through. It's so hard to lose a friend to someone else...especially when YOU knew them first. That hurts. This peom hit close to home so I have to give it a 5/5

Great Poem!! And coming from the heart always makes the poem more meaningful!

5.5**
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Good grammar or not, this is a great poem! 5/5

The depth and emotion you put into this are overwhelming. easily felt by the reader. i thought it flowed well throughout and again the repetition worked nicely. the ending was beautiful...full of emotion and holding so much power...beautiful.

Sweet. i love it its completely awesome