Comments : Disintegration (Of Autumn's Fair Lips)

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    You never cease to amaze me. This poem is yet again.. amazing.. and I don't use that work lightly. Your words astound me and I always end up reading your work about 3 times through before I can comment. Anyway, onto the poem. It flows beautifully of course and the meaning yet again confounds the mind and traps your senses, intriguing the reader until they can't put the mystery down. 5/5 for sure from me. ^_^

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    You are an amazing writer-just saying. I've read a few so far and i just have to say they are all so far awesome. I love your wording and style. It is very original. Keep up this fantastic work. 5^5.
    you mention insomnia in a poem and then once that you couldnt sleep..do you have insomnia?
    And thank you for the comments on mine. I really appreciate it. To answer your question, i use to, but not my wrists. that was too noticable- i did my legs usually. =\ It was a difficult time and stuff.