I love this.. i really do

"Rampaging through my heart,
Thoughts of uncontrollable nature."
A wonderful opening stanza. Such feeling and power comes from these words. The flow here is fantastic, an excellent write, one of your best. Greta xo

Inside my shell I wait and bleed.

Slowly as I wait dying,
Only now do I see.
While I lay here, to myself I'm lying.
Darkness is all thats left in me.

Silently I wipe away a tear,

i really like this part

keep up the good writings