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by kitkat girl
This is a good poem!! I like how you repeated, You can, in your poem.
I really enjoyed reading this poem :)
The flow was good and the repetition in the lines worked really well. I really liked the ending, it gave a good twist at the end.
Keep it up!
by Shirani Graham
Some places, some fields your expressions goes in an attractive manner which I can't describe you. So with one words I say that you have professional ideas of writing more lovely poems and that I will be looking forward same.. 5/5
Jag blev glad ner jag leste denna... very nice...