Comments : Won't Do All These Things

  • 13 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    This is a good poem!! I like how you repeated, You can, in your poem.
    keep writing
    peace
    soffe

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

    The flow was good and the repetition in the lines worked really well. I really liked the ending, it gave a good twist at the end.

    Keep it up!

    Amy x

  • 13 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Some places, some fields your expressions goes in an attractive manner which I can't describe you. So with one words I say that you have professional ideas of writing more lovely poems and that I will be looking forward same.. 5/5

    Nazeer

  • 13 years ago

    by Em

    Jag blev glad ner jag leste denna... very nice...