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by Lost Soul 691
I liked it, short and sweet, but it lost the flow in the last line of the 2nd stanza with "grow and grow". To me, it would sound better replacing the first grow with another word. But hey, that's just me and I don't usually use a rhyming style. LOL
by needing a miracle
Aww this was a very nice poem 5/5
Awee this is so cute!!