Comments : A Poem For You

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    I liked it, short and sweet, but it lost the flow in the last line of the 2nd stanza with "grow and grow". To me, it would sound better replacing the first grow with another word. But hey, that's just me and I don't usually use a rhyming style. LOL

  • 12 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Aww this was a very nice poem 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Awee this is so cute!!