Comments : My Endless Night

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Really good piece. Actually sent a shiver or two through me as I read.

    Growls of hate deafen, saliva splashes the ground.
    Hounds of hell await command, distant drums pound.

    One could really visualize with this write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    Great piece as always. Your talent is awesome. The way you can write about anything. Imagery in this piece is fantastic.
    Keep up the excellent writing.
    Love Cindy