Wow Chelsey what a tale you have put to verse here. Very deep and disturbing.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Yikes Chels this one gave me a shiver right to the bone.
You've woven quite a sad tale here ... and the imagery most likely will keep me from sleeping tonight ... lol

Excellent piece as always sweet pea!
Love ya
Momma

How sad and tragic yet filled with so much love....

Wow! That's such an amazing and powerful poem! This has really touched me. What a great idea. You're really good!