Comments : Lies in your smile

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ahh Chelsey what a sweet poem of friendship you have penned. Your kindness and compassion shine in this piece.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Remember you have a friend with eyes who knows
    Whose glasses are pretty plain and clear
    That you're lying when you smile
    Remember I have two listening ears
    ^^^
    Chels what an amazing ending stanza ...

    Suffocation about to take place
    My friend you are face down in the dirt
    Buried up to your neck in sadness
    I know you shed tears because you're hurt
    ^^^
    Chels I feel you've jumped into my head with this stanza. (Though I know this poem wasn't written for me... lol) Is there something about my A.I.D that I don't know about. Special powers ... of seeing into another person's brain ... lol

    Anyways before I ramble on forever ...
    Excellent piece Chels and a great read

    Love ya sweet pea
    Momma

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Chelz, you are a dear sweet friend, with a big beautiful caring heart, I hope your friend knows that.... a very heartfelt write.