Comments : Dreamer's Goodbye.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I've tried to many times to read the outer door,
    `to = too

    Minor mistake (: Anyway, Brittnay,
    You truly have a way with words. When I first read the title, I thought this would be cliche, but you gave the title its justice. From my view, the poem just radiates with a great message. The first line, to the very last sentence -- the whole thing was just beautiful . The ending was gorgeous, btw.
    I haven't read anything like it. How you started it -- interesting thought & image to place in a readers head, but the ending? Masterpiece. I don't have words for it,
    It all just tied together flawlessly.

    "Quietly I'm going to conform to a world of harsh realities,
    And this mind will not conquer the silence, but embrace it."
    Beautifully simple, real words to live by.