Nitin
Welcome back :) You still have your magic. This was such a treat for me. I know how hard you have been working and what little time you have had. That makes this one so much more special. Thanks for all the time you have given me. Excellent job.
Love you yaar Cindy

Will you catch me when I fall
From my cliff of sorrow
Need your love to continue living
Without you time is borrowed
^^^
Oh Cindy & Nitin this ending is a tear-jerker indeed. You both collab such wonderful work ... and manage to pull the reader into the poem and leave them with a tear in their eye.

Excellent piece my friends !
Luanne

This poem is wonderfully pieced together with true meaing and feeling well done xox sam

Such a wonderful penned you portrait here feature with Cindy... yet expressed within beautiful emotions.... Excellent write my friend, keep them coming, take care. Bert. ~

Nitin
I had to thank you one more time for this wonderful chance to write with you again. Looking forward to the time your work load slows down. So you once again have time to bless us with your beautiful poetry :)
Have a Great weekend.
Love Cindy

Excellent job on this collab you have written with Cindy. It is almost impossible to tell who has written what part. You have to really be in tune with each other to pull that off and the two of you have done great. Keep up the great work. Best Wishes your friend Ben

Nitin, wondeful to see another collab from you and Cindy. This one is so beautiful and sad....emotions are heartfelt and deep....perfect flow and blending of styles to effortlessly transition from one verse to the next....well done! Debbie

Amazing poem!!! i love the structure of this poem and the way you worded things....your an excelltn writer...look forward to reading more!! 5/5

Amazing, and dark..yet again, more comments above that I could only repeat.. 'Nuff said. Very well done. xx

Tears burning as they fall
My soul is crying for you
Melting a path to my heart
Where love still lives so true

Love the opening stanza. Somehow I can feel each and every single line of this poem. While I was reading it, I got a punch in my guts, I guess you brought back some concealed memories.

Beautifully written.

Haven't read your stuff in a while but it was amazing, just as i remembered and knew it would be.