Comments : Where's Justice?

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Hi dear,

    your poems are flourishing, each and every expression there could be a precious cherish awaits from the professional authors... well done and keep up your work.. 100 marks and you deserve for this poem..

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this is an amazingly powerful poem and very very nicely written.. it is just filled with emotion and it really is a very deep poem.. very nice job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    Wow. flawless

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    I loved this poem. It was so somber and mellow. Smooth and flowed gracefully amd effortlessly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Omg, that poem was very awesome!! definately a 5/5!! I enjoyed the last stanza:
    What he did
    She'll never tell
    She's silenced in death,
    And he'll burn in hell!

    Very powerful and very moving! I could feel the emotions and anger throughout the whole read. I could hardly take my eyes off of it...great job again and best wishes!

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Very sad poem. Told a horrifying story, The first stanza asks the question and last Finishes in Sadness.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow that was amazing, I loved this poem. The imagery behind it was so incredible. And the emotions, omg.. It was really nice to read this piece...

    That deserves a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Very deep and dark. I can relate to the girl... 5/5

    luv luv luv
    Lizzi

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Mounful and explicit, so real and lucid poem. I love the way you have written it. I gave you 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This is so sad... I can feel the anguish and even guilt that this poem exposes...

    A very hard topic to write about; yet you have done so with elegance...

    Nicely written despite all the anger that it leaves a reader. That is waht poems a poem great...

    --Sher