Different.. Straight to the point.. I like the positivity of this poem, and the strength that you show you will carry on.. Well done. xx

Short, positive message with your head up high. Nicely done.

Excellent job, Although I liked the starting much better than the end, and the title wasn't so eye catching. Nice job though. And thanks for commenting on my poem.

Positive theme... this should inspire folks to keep on fighting and not give up.

Wow Andrew =D I am soo happy you asked me to read this poem! You were right.. it is truly an amazing poem and I loved it! I don't really like poems about life, but you really won me over with this piece.. Every single line really made you think about life and different things it can do to you.

Great job!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Nice poem, unique, I like it <3 5/5

You word it so good that the point you are trying to get across is shown only within a few short lines...the emotion is great, and it sends a message everyone wants to hear..great job=]

I really like this poem. Greatly written and very true.

I like the topic and the message is great! This poem is so positive, I really enjoyed. Form of this piece is excellent and you expressed emotions greatly.

Wow, it's such a great poem! btw, thanks for your comment! :)

This one is great man. Gee thanks again for the comment you gave me.

Wow .. this is so great .. speechless !!