Short but very sweet....flow was great and i love your choice of words on this one.

again wonderful job.5/5

A very beautiful mixture of words. Very powerfully written, well done Dave, Greta xo

Short, sweet, and great! i really enjoyed reading it...nice job!=]

Wow, this piece is greatly written, with excellent wording and totally amazing atmosphere within the words. My favorite lines are:
-You are my quintessence of virtuousness,
For my less than unblemished heart,-

Well done, 5/5 from me

This poem is superb and interesting. It is very powerful and it has excellent atmosphere. It isn't classic love poem which is great.

Nice poem with unique wordings. Very well strung poem with nice meanings. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Beautiful piece of poetry! I love your use of words!
may the flame of love burn eternally in each persons hearts
5/5!

Sweet poem