Strong last line there and related to this poem so i know its hard. good job xxxx

Very well written if i may say. It is sad though, but still very nice 5/5

This was very emotional.. The pain, and the confusion, are all portrayed strongly in this peice. I can relate to this, cause something similar is happening to me.
It's scary,
To know your pushing away the one thing that will make you happy...

I really enjoyed it this perfecttly penned poem,
5/5 Elaine

Kia..........This poem is outstanding, your words herein have told the exact story of what my poems do yet with one difference. You have an ability that i do not, you can write your poems crisp and clear without the necessity of rhyme. You are a fantastic poet Kia and i would love to chat with you some time about your poems. If i may quote 1 phrase

**I've always loved you more than any other
I loved you before I laid eyes on you
And in spite of everything I still love you now
I can't watch us wither and die
It's tearing me in half
As soon as we're through
I'll be gone too**

This, for all of you who dont know me, this is an epiphany of my life. You truely are talented. Keep up the GREAT work.

Matt