Very sad strong emotion....very understandable you expressed so much in a very short write but still i have told this to many people
pain is a great subject to write about but remember "pain in life is real but it doesn't have to be your whole life, many things make up your life but pain is only a PART of your life"

I really liked this poem. You're up front with your feelings. This was really good.

It was a very sad yet emotion piece, i prefer rhyming but this was great for me. you really put how your feeling and stuff, pen to paper, and you express them so well. 5/5

nikki