Very well written! humour and sadess are not very easy to out together but you've done a great job, keep it up.x x x tc
ps. please do read and comment on some my poems thank you.

Brilliantly penned... this one made me smile... 5/5

I can really relate 2 this i know how u feel 4real........i loved it

Wow,
thats very touching i can relate to that a lilttle bit lolz give it a 5