I relly like your attitude in this piece.....It drives me crazy those girls who think they need a guy to fulfill their every needs when clearly we can stand on our own.....I hope as you grow up you don't lose this attitude....wonderful write!
Chels

Lol, nice one. A very strong and powerful attitude you have. Great job.

You expressed emotions superbly and topic is great. Very unique and interesting, atmosphere is also good.