5/5

Gosh! i love the way this is written!!! Good job!
Keep it up...!

Very nice i liked it very much theres soo much feeling in it keep it up

Beautiful yet very sad poem

It is sooooooooo nice. i love reading your poems because it saves my money from buying sleeping pills, i always drift off to sleep when i read them ...thank you =)
keep writing poems. i want to read more and sleep well, you too sleep well but not by reading my poems =( ok bye now

Awesome poem :) this is the kind of poem you dont get bored when reading it, you have to keep reading, you have to know the ending otherwise it torments you hehe i never thought it would have this ending i was thinking some kind of disease or something hehe!
keep writing! :)
dani

It's very good.

Really nice
i like how you wrote it and all
and the ending was good
5/5

xo.louiii

Thank you for your comment!! i think yours are great too!! :) i'm so touched... but it has a sad ending aww... but still i think it's great!

Awww, very well written!
I like it =] 5/5!

A great story of frustration. Very well expressed

*thumbs up*

kinda remind me of my high school days :S

Awww this is such a sweet poem...i really feel for you if it was ur real experience i mean wow what pain love can be huh?

This is so sad, yet so typical.
girls can be just as bad as boys when it comes to love.

What a masterpiece... i luv it.. 5/5