Loved it 5/5
laura marie (sweets lol)

Simply Amazing

Loved your emotion and while reading this it gave me inspiration to write another poem Thanx

I found my favorite poem of yours. The flow is amazing, the words are beautiful. =) You need to keep writing mister.

"Then an old man stopped me
He told me "life isn't what it should be
We look one way
And the other the next day
We are all confused
And emotionally abused
Keep your calm
Don't follow your palm
Live your life
With out the knife
Someday you'll see
How great life can be
We all know there's nature
And there's a preacher
Nature has her way
And the preacher can only say
Nature can stop the preacher's reign
But the preacher can never stop the rain."
He said saddened "I'm a preacher
I'm nothing compared to nature"
His words went soft
As darkness went aloft
He preached to me once more
Before he showed me to the door
"Things happen, because they should,
You can change them only if you would." "

My favorite bit. :) Very inspirational. <3

Love it