Comments : She Tried

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    This is a poem that people will remember. Keep writing, you are very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    I really liked this poem very good i must say def 5/5 for this such a good piece xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful. I think the flow was really amazing. Emotions were deep and really strong in this and touching piece. REally enjoyed this!
    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Left to drown
    in emptiness
    she just hopes
    they remember this

    ^ these lines said it all to me! they were soooo powerful! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Great job!!! i love the rythme of the poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    Wow, another good one. Must've been gone through some tramatic to write something that deep.

    another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm, i like this one too, not my fav. but still good, is just somethink seems to be missing... maybe its because its so short... but the flow way still very good, and the word choice way very good as well...4/5