Wow you must really have a great guy such a wonderful write i remember feeling like this 5/5

Wow the feelings expressed in this poem were so real and so powerful! One after the other, happy, sad, excited, dizzy... so many, and in the end you tied it together so nicely! I love the different ways you described him and it overall was a masterpiece. I can tell that you love him because you were able to write this piece of art right after talking to him. You had all the ideas and all the emotions right there in that moment. Great job! And keep writing!

I loved it!

There isn't much to say.
except that it was a great poem.
there isn't one line that i would change.
Loved it!
xoxo
--Chelsey