I like it.
It is very easy to read and understand, but you sould add more to it to give more a view.

Very nice .. i liked it
A work from the heart as i call

Melissa

So sad. really well written. great flow, and gread story. Unfortunatly i can relate far too well! "it's a terrible feeling, falling out of love" (a line from one of my poems)

I didn't know you felt that way to her, wish you would of told me, you know you can tell me anything! well you did get a really really good poem out of it! lol.... sorry not really funny
love
Big Sis