Bert
This is such a beautiful piece you have penned. Imagery is excellent.

And if time will have changed her body
I will still recognize her by the unchanging
Smell of her soul, Bitter sweet
Poisonous and healing at the same time.

These lines really touched my heart. A very deep love.
Excellent job on this my friend.
Take Care love Cindy

You know one thing. the last stanza of poem realy is great. though other poem was also great. excellent piece of work your deserve 5/5
take care

Absolutely beautiful!

5/5 Ingrid

You are truly a poet. There is so much depth in this piece, so much to dissect and see. You write with such strong soul --- it is awe-inspiring. It's a wonderful subject you've written on, and I often think of how unfortunate it would be to live without each one of the senses, as they play such a huge part in my life. The air of this piece led me into thinking through synaesthesia. A real pleasure to read. You have such a beautiful gift.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Wow
great work!
keep it up
-Lisa