We definitely need for her to open up and cry upon the land.... this is a bit sad to me!

WOW! I really liked the uniqueness of this write...the last stanza really tied the entire piece together...what a beautiful nature piece!!

I love the first stanza.
Great piece about the rain.

Might is partly weak
when it refuses rightful tears

^^ Wow, have you grown older! Lol...I mean wiser!

Beautifully written poem, imagery is great and you created wonderful atmosphere. Well done! You deserves 5/5

This was an excellent write,great imagery ,you turned a simple subject into a beautiful piece of art,well done!

Its really deep i like it!