Comments : I WANNA LET U KNO

  • 16 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    Hi this is the first poem of urs i have read i think its great x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by shambreka

    Hey your poem is very sweet. i think it is great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Hmm this was an okay poem. at the end,you kind of went off flow and lost your rhyming pattern. but the beginning you started out very well. keep it up! :]