I can imagine what your going through actually.. This is a bit of a sad poem, but I guess that's what makes it so good. Btw thnx for the comment .x

This is a beautifully written poem, i love the how you worded it, it just sounds really good...5/5 keep up the great work:)
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Aww hunn i can feel the pain im sorry that he treated you like this but you did an excellent job on the poem 5/5<33

I know the pian
even though its working out with me and the guy right now
i still feel that feeling
even though i shouldn't
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i like this poem alot
well worded
5/5

This poem worked soo well!!!
it's so easy to relate to and so true, making it even better!!
i love your use of repetition and i especially love the 3rd and last stanzas, they're the easiest for me to relate to!!!
a really good piece =)
5/5 x x x