I feel you girl.. good poem.

Hmm 4/5 because it wasnt one of your best either but it wasnt bad. =]]

I really like this one, it is greatly written, and it sounds so honest which makes it very touching. You expressed emotions very well.
I just don't like one line:
-Because of you, I hate this life because Im living without you,-
^I don't like it because you wrote you two times in the same line, and that disturbs the flow in that part of the poem. You could change one you at the end of the line.
The rest of the poem is really great, truly well done.
I like the wording in the whole piece, too.

Wonderful comments, exciting expressions and its a lovley feeling.... 5/5

Nazeer

This poem is really good, though, to be sincere, i'd make one little suggestion...
you could make three stanzas out of it, to be easier to read... unless you like it better that way...
the writing is amazing, though... it shows exactly what a heart-broken person feels...(i know it 'cause i'm one...)
the number of stanzas shows another thing, as well... you'd be an excellent sonnet writer...
Because, at first sight, only one stanza doesn't seem good, but after you read it, it fits perfectly...
so, i guess that, with another two lines, that would also give an excellent sonnet...
but that's only my mind wandering...

to shorten it up, it's a very good poem...
keep going
*isabel*

Nice job... I like the way you repeated Because of you

Aw I like this poem very nice job on the
writing. Kepe up teh wonderful work.
The flow was a bit off though might want
to work on that overall great job.
5/5
<3tay

This poem is really great and well written. the flow was very smooth and well worded. Loved this one and it must be 5/5 for sure. Keep writing!!!

Hmm how sad very heartfelt and touching piece! the message was absolutely true coz love was exactly it hurts in some reasons.. well u had portrayed ur feelings here very well.. keep up the good work and keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

The use of repetition is cute
but some lines in the middle of the poem seem too short, don't they?
but whatever this is just a detail but the whole poem is beautiful and so sad