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Great poem wallace..i really enjoyed reading it..and your word choice just really made the poem stand out..it gave it a spark....beautifully written and flowed nicely.. wonderful job. 5/5

and i have no idea who the author is that you're talking about...i stared at it for a while and then i was like grr i give up lol...but great poem.=]

The flow was flawless and the words were so smooth...i dont usually read poems like these but this was most deffiently worth reading...well done=]

Really Cute Poem love the colorful wording
5/5

You have brought me back to thinking of my English class poems lol. Each stanza holds a meaning all its own, each image is relative to one another, the ending done perfectly to quiet the surrounding tones.

'Redeemed with grace whilst jilted by woe
Patented in all ways yet usual as men
Gifted with elegance nor bombast in words
Laced with vast blessing cannot thou be penned?'

I really liked these line's they written
flawlessly, and really reached out.
The whole poem was penned Magnificently. Such beautiful word's portrayed in an enchanting way.
I loved this peice.
Well done,
Elaine. 5/5

Wow...That was so beautiful, and the flow was so nice through out the whole thing and the wording was just incredible, I really enjoyed reading this...

5/5

NIce poem first stanza my favorite 5/5

I thought this was a really good poem, i really did enjoy reading this. You have a talent, this was so good!
Love Tara-Kay
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Beautifully written love poem, filled with emotions and greatly written, with very powerful, wonderfully created imagery.
My favorite stanza is:
-Laid upon solemn dignity treasured deep in thy soul
Hearst's thy quest for love's esteemed favor
So shall thy reside nor pleasure such attainment
Yet in delightful cheer, endorse upon thy savior-
The wording in the whole piece is excellent, too.

Imagery is excellent and this poem is amazingly written. Emotions are beautifully expressed. You have great talent. Very touching piece. It really deserves 5/5

This was beautifully written emotions just flow through it so well!
you made this poem great 5/5

I enjoyed this piece it had a hidden depth and was beautifully written.

This is simply a beautiful piece, the words, the flow, everything about it is just elegant.... and I'm sure deadsoul is absolutely thrilled how you worked him in there.....

Wallace what a beautiful piece you have penned. Imagery is awesome.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Amazing work wallace!
keep up the amazing writes,
maybe u can look at some of mine sometime
takecare
-Lisa

You had a lot of great images in this one and your message was very clear the name is a bit harder though but none the less a good write all the way around. Plot121

Yes this one is one of your masterpieces. Superb imagery and coherent and cohesive lexis used. Poeticallya nd lexically strong. Hats off to this piece :)

tc
Fsams

This is such a beautiful piece of art.

The flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, the imagery was fantastic, and coupled with the content, concept and wording, every aspect of this poem came together to create a truly beautiful read.

I have no idea who the author is, but nevertheless, this is just beautifully written.

I love it. The old English again really set a mood, nice work. xxx alex xxx