I liked it, i thought it was a little too long, though it flowed well, i just couldnt keep myself interested.
But you did a good job no doubt.
love Tara-Kay
x

I liked it..beautifully well written..I enjoyed reading it..it was beautiful..the flow in the poem was wonderful & so emotional...the words were really deep..and I loved the last stanza..was great.
Good job..
-sarah